This is lovely, although in terms of syllable counting, the second line has a few too many syllables to work as a true imitation. The imagery is fantastic though and adds lots of layers of meaning via all the reader's associations with bees and hives.
This is lovely, although in terms of syllable counting, the second line has a few too many syllables to work as a true imitation. The imagery is fantastic though and adds lots of layers of meaning via all the reader's associations with bees and hives.
ReplyDeleteI take it you have been to Hawaii ... sounds like fun, I really want to vaca there some time :)
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