Monday, October 28, 2013

Assignment # 13


A Petrarchan Sonnet Poem

TOO BRIGHT TO SEE

I held in my hand a piece of object that shined bright  (A)
while starring at this piece I felt weak  (B)
inside --my eyes left a streak   (B)
of wetness down my cheek because the light  (A)
that shined made my eyes water till   (C)
a cloud covered the sky and took away the glare   (D)
of this object that I couldn’t make out. I stared   (D)
into my hand and it was a diamond—I was happy still.   (C)

I couldn’t tell what it was a first  (E)
because it was too bright to see   (F)
the diamond after grabbing it by my hand.   (G)
I was happy to find it in the sand    (G)
that I quickly opened my hand and I burst    (E)
into tears for now I am grateful for finding this in the sea.   (F)

3 comments:

  1. This is really good!! I like the words you used to rhyme and I can get a good mental image of what you set up!

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  2. I'm interested in the actual situation of the poem. Is this a literal diamond the speaker finds? I want to find that beach. On another level, it seems this is very much a philosophical poem about seeing/sight/insight.

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  3. Yup! The speaker finds the diamond. :)

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