A Petrarchan Sonnet
Poem
TOO BRIGHT TO SEE
I held in my hand a piece of object that shined bright (A)
while starring at this piece I felt weak (B)
inside --my eyes left a streak (B)
of wetness down my cheek because the light (A)
that shined made my eyes water till (C)
a cloud covered the sky and took away the glare (D)
of this object that I couldn’t make out. I stared (D)
into my hand and it was a diamond—I was happy still. (C)
I couldn’t tell what
it was a first (E)
because it was too bright to see (F)
the diamond after grabbing it by my hand. (G)
I was happy to find it in the sand (G)
that I quickly opened my hand and I burst
(E)
into tears for now I am grateful for finding this in the sea. (F)
This is really good!! I like the words you used to rhyme and I can get a good mental image of what you set up!
ReplyDeleteI'm interested in the actual situation of the poem. Is this a literal diamond the speaker finds? I want to find that beach. On another level, it seems this is very much a philosophical poem about seeing/sight/insight.
ReplyDeleteYup! The speaker finds the diamond. :)
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