Assignment # 10
Similarities and differences of
plot between “Orientation” and “ A & P.”
In the story “Orientation” by
Daniel Orozco, it emphasizes on direct points and explains everything. Danial
writes in a way to let you focus on the symbols in the work place even if it’s
not important. “ "This is the
refrigerator. You may put your lunch in it”(Pg.48). He also uses short sentence
structures and listings. “ Kevin Howard sits in that cubicle over there”(Pg.
49). “And this is our Supplies Cabinet”
(Pg. 48). He uses character Development by naming the other co -workers and
giving advice.” "In any case, if you bring a lunch, put a little something extra
in the bag for Barry Hacker. We have four Barry’s in this office (Pg. 48).“
Gwendolyn Stich sits in that office there. She is crazy about penguins, and
collects penguin knickknacks, penguin posters and coffee mugs and stationery,
penguin stuffed animals, penguin jewelry sweater and t- shirts and socks (Pg.
49).” In A&P it also explains what people are doing or wearing. “It was
bright green and the seams on the bra were still sharp and her belly was still
pretty pale so I guessed she just got it (the suit)(Pg. 699). “ She had sort of
oaky hair that the sun and salt had bleached, done up in a bun that was
unraveling and a kind of prim face (Pg. 600).” The cashier boy was judgmental
and compared customers. In Orientation so did the Co- worker showing the new worker around.
The difference
between the writers between Orientation and A&P is its character
development, its setting, and its figure of speech. The bosses were different. In Orientation the boss is always around and gives out alot of information. The boss for A&P seems to hide more and only comes out to check on things. He seems more aware of the rules. Here are some examples: In
Orientation, “ this is your phone. Never answer your phone (Pg. 46).” It’s very
short and the author introduces other characters in the story. “ Amanda Pierce,
who tolerates Russell Nash, is in love with Albert Bosch, whose office is over
there (Pg. 47.’’ In A&P the author introduces the girls by explaining what they
look like. “ She was a chunky kid, with
a good tan an a sweet broad soft- looking can with those two crescents of white
just under it, where the sun never seems to hit (Pg. 599) This story though
really had longer sentence structures than Orientation. Here is an example for the bosses. For A& P, "then everybody's luck begins to run out. Lengel comes in from haggling with a truck full of cabbages on the lot and is about to scuttle into that door marked Manager behind which he hides all day when the girls touch his eye. he comes over and says Girls this isn't the beach, then he says, " girls I don't want to argue with you. After this come in here with your shoulders covered. Its our policy ( Pg. 602)."
Another similarity
between the two is having certain rules. In the Orientation he describes about
each little thing about what the new co-worker needed to know. “ Gather your
supplies quietly. The Supplies cabinet is divided into four sections. Section
One contains letterhead stationery, blank paper and envelopes memo and note
pads and son on (Pg. 48).” A&P the manager comes up to the girls and says”
Girls, this isn’t the beach (Pg 601).” The store had a rule to not be un dressed. “We
want you decently dressed when you come in here (Pg. 602). Between these two stories they both had differences and also similarities. They both had different bosses who had different rules and that is what really brought out how they were different and similar.
I think you get a little sidetracked by trying to compare things that I did not ask you to compare. For example, when you mention "character development, its setting, and its figure of speech," you aren't focusing in on the subject matter I asked you to look at. Those things don't relate directly to the concept of work or bosses or interactions among co-workers. That said, only the final 2 paragraphs are really working towards an understanding of work. Finally, I'm not sure we can assume that the boss is the one showing someone around the office in "Orientation"...
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